I just started this fanfic today, got all caught up and I have to say I am quite impressed. Your descriptions are so vivid that I really got lost in the story. Also you have exquisite word choice, perfectly descriptive and flowing beautifully. By far the best quality of this story is how true to character Leon and D are. It is so rare to find that sort of dedication to personality in a fanfic. I'm really excited for the next chapter, can't wait! Keep up the amazing job! ^-^