I have to say I thought it was cute, if a little rushed. I was also surprised by how fast they decided they liked each other. Besides, I would have liked a few more visits between the two of them with D insisting on Leon wearing the chiao-fu!
However, despite it's cuteness and fluffiness (which I love!) you had some inconsistencies, for one the snow level from the beginning was a lot higher, presumingly written before you knew about LA and snow. Second was how they acted and indeed how active they were. On the couch, off the couch, on the couch and so on. I'm also not sure if Leon could hear Chris, however I haven't read much of PetShop of Horrors, in fact I only read the 10th manga. So I also can't comment on how in character they were or not.
Overall though, I liked it. Interesting story, I'll go check out the next arc.
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Date: 2007-01-21 08:23 am (UTC)However, despite it's cuteness and fluffiness (which I love!) you had some inconsistencies, for one the snow level from the beginning was a lot higher, presumingly written before you knew about LA and snow. Second was how they acted and indeed how active they were. On the couch, off the couch, on the couch and so on. I'm also not sure if Leon could hear Chris, however I haven't read much of PetShop of Horrors, in fact I only read the 10th manga. So I also can't comment on how in character they were or not.
Overall though, I liked it. Interesting story, I'll go check out the next arc.